into-the-weeds said: You might want to rephrase that first sentence—it’s really 2 or 3 different ideas, and the way it’s written right now is very jarring and makes it sound like awesomeness is a result of abuse. This is not what you are saying! But it really reads that

Realsocialskills said:

Oh. I didn’t realize; it made more sense in my head. Attempted to rephrase. Is this version clearer?